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Epic jam band sesh.

AndieCiambotti responds:

Thank you!! I actually recorded everything separately... It was like a mental jam :D

Top!!

Your sense of melody and structure is very mature, well done.

I bet this will be Top 3 for AIM.

AlbeGian responds:

Thanks a lot, Sequenced!!

Make sure your bass is mono!

Melodically cool track.
The string rhythm part in the 2nd breakdown doesnt fit. It can use more work.

Add a bit more reverb and delay on that guitar to fill it out inbetween notes.

Kick is wayyy to clicky and loud.
Makes it harder to hear the rest of the elements

A more punchier kick and less “sub and clicky” would work better.

Claps can be louder.

The 808 has too many notes for that portamento effect you have on it I think

WakerLink responds:

yeah, went a little bit overboard with the amount of 808 notes, I don't know why but I go overboard with them a lot of the time, thanks for the feedback

Only thing I don’t like is the static quarter notes bass in the breakdown.

WakerLink responds:

kinda ran out of ideas as to what to do with the bassline there, thanks for the critique

Using the RuneScape sound fonts? Haha.

Some of the bass notes don’t fit with the chord progression.

Add a bit of reverb. It will help fill out the space in between your guitar notes.

Petrol4brains responds:

You caught me on that bass line! Wasn’t sure if it was super noticeable, but I’ll look into it. Thanks!

The first arp doesn’t sound in key.

The breakdown loses a lot of the energy from the first part. A shorter breakdown with some of the percussive elements could keep the energy going.

Outro is way too short for a long breakdown like this.

CryNN responds:

Thanks for your criticism. I never thought about people disliking the long breakdown since a huge majority of trance tracks have a breakdown actually losing the energy on purpose. For better transitions i would suggest to listen to the extended mix because ive had to cut this version to follow all the rules of the AIM (max lenght must be 6 minutes.) I was lacking ideas how to finish the outro so i ended it abruptly with the guitar

The arp is in key (or it should be :D )

Change the snare!!! It’s too weak for this.

Shorten the kick too. It clashes with the sub.

PandaThePanda responds:

Thank u! It takes someone pointing it out for me to notice sometimes!

Mix is very very rough. Not sure about the weird delay on the vocal.

PikeyPaige responds:

Agreed. I threw this together for the AIM contest. I think it should be judged based on the relevance the content of the song has to the art piece I chose to write about. I personally don’t like this song at all but I think it fits the piece

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