Sequenced's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Beta~ Downpour (2nd Edit)]

Great.

I'm glad that Newgrounds can see what real House music sounds like. Keep making more, you will definitely get to the tops with this attitude.

aliaspharow responds:

Really nice to see how my music is greatly appreciated even when i do it completely my style.

[Acid Paradox - Monster]

Good song, dude.

My only critic is that there should be some more bass, and perhaps more high end synths. The mix doesn't feel 'full', if that makes any sense.

[F-777 - "Life"]

Woah...

You have been getting a lot of fanboys recently.

All I got to say is - stop EQing your stuff way damn high, and lower the sidechain compression shizzle. Just too much compression... lol

Keep at it, F.

F-777 responds:

Hey! Wasn't trying to EQ my stuff high =).
Agreed i went overboard on the sidechain XD.

Thanks for the awesome review!!

[Eternity (Part1)]

Belated NAC Judge Review

Not really uplifting. It sounds more like a mild emotion to me. The piano melodies are good.

I also think that I would change the percussion to something similar like a drum n bass rhythm. The 4x4 beat did not feel right. Lastly, the snare did not fit because it ruined the flow of the song. Perhaps you should choose a better snare sample next time?

Well, that is all I can think of at the moment. Try again next time!

[What did you see]

Belated NAC Judge Review

The mix between the pad and percussion is really weird. The melodies do not really satisfy the uplifting tone to me, probably because the chord progression is quite random. The ending was not all that great too. Overall, the arrangement needs fixing, as well as the mix, and the melodies / chords need improvement.

[Acid Paradox-a boy and his dog]

Belated NAC Judge Review

Sounds like a farily average uplifting song. Relaxing and soothing. However, I would like to hear a different variation to the chord progression for transitions or something similar. It got boring listening to the same guitar arpeggios for 3 minutes.

[[dB] Underwater Scenic Route]

Belated NAC Judge Review

This song sounds like an idea, so I'm assuming that you didn't put a lot of effort in this one.

Any ways, that pluck is played way too much and overpowers the rest of the song. The percussion is weak and don't even hear a bass. Melodic wise, it is kind of boring. Nothing ever happens in this song. I guess you could call this uplifting, but it needs to have a fixed structure to achieve that state.

Try better, next time.

[Cat Fish]

Belated NAC Judge Review

It's great for an IDM track, but I wouldn't really call this one uplifting. Besides that, your glitched effects sounded really cool IMO.

[-On The Break-]

Belated NAC Judge Review

Awesome song. The mix is flawless and crystal clear. Chord progression is very uplifting and satisfying. The climax is good, but it felt like there was a lack of effort in the transition to your climax. One more thing, I would like to hear a bit more variation in your melody or perhaps you should add a counter melody. That's only a suggestion, you don't need to follow through it.

Good stuff though.

[Walk]

Glad to see you are still making music

Good song, once again mate.

In my opinion, I think that the chorus lines could be repeated a couple more times. Also, you could have made the ending a lot better rather than fading out. A bit lazy now, are we? ;)

Lastly, the pad could be lowered a bit so that the percussion can sound more up front. Have a look into that and see what you think sounds right.

Great stuff overall. Keep at it.

giovanni808 responds:

Hey, thanks for the review!

Yea I am quite lazy :( The song wasI actually a 1 year old project file I found on my older computer, and I decided to use my new microphone :)

Are you speaking about more chorus lines in the middle?

I am not so good at mastering, but I will look at the project file and adjust a bit, and reupload the song the same place :)