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[Speedrun]

i am amazing

Acid-Paradox responds:

Shut up Billy

[ParagonX9 - Seamless Chaoz rmx]

LOL hi seamless

that slayer tho

[Saikyō danketsu]

this isnt even drum n bass. start listening to the genre and practice more.

your melodies don't make sense, the flow is off, and there is just way too much reverb.

im being blunt here but thats the only way people learn instead of sugarcoating everything.

PerfectComplexion responds:

I don't want sugarcoating. not going to help me any. thank you for your feed back. I know it's not DnB but.. I didn't know what to put it under :P I've only been doing this a few months and don't entirely understand what makes a song good or terrible. I appreciate your comment and i'll practice on the negatives you gave me.

[Xtrullor - Enigma]

way too much reverb. some synths sound really bland. there some distortoin at 2:05 btw.

the drop flow was smooth as fuck tho. in your break down tho your saws sound REALLY cheezy. it kinda ruins the whole track.

also, i don't know if your snare for the 2nd build up was purposely panned all the way to the right.

eh

thats all i got

good shizzle

Xtrullor responds:

Really good points you got there. I'm on the lookout to fix such problems in future tracks.

[21 Guns (8bit)]

noob

w00tw00 responds:

boobs.

[Duncan (Cover)]

cool melodic song. not so sure if i like that weird phaser thing. maybe cause there aren't enough harmonics to make it sound solid? just sounds amateur imo

also dont really like the 2nd guitar panned to the left so much. the room of the mix just felt too empty. maybe have two arpeggiated guitar tracks to fill it up?

i think a more bongo/conga based percussion would sound better than just tapping on the guitar.

meh. thats all i got. has a real calming mood, probably smoke weed / drink to it. its got that atmosphere. :P

Ceevro responds:

THAT'S it! I knew something was getting me about the vocals, but I couldn't put my finger on it! I'll fix the phaser thing, and the guitar. Checking my mix, yeah...I seem to have put it almost 15% to the left...I usually never go over 10. Those are easy fixes, and I guess so is borrowing some bongos from the music store. Kinda odd, I've gotten that comment twice...I thought the guitar tapping worked quite well. Guess I'm biased towards guitar percs.

Very helpful review, Sequenced. Spot-on, as always!

[Mysterious Planet]

Use a frame of reference before you start your tracks. By that I mean listen to a professional song then you won't need expensive gear. I still use my shitty headset even tho I got monitors :p

Anyway the intro was kinda boring . Once the main chorus broke in it was a lot easier to listen to.

One last thing , work on you transitions. Add more fx, reverb delay blah blah , all that crap. Don't be lazy with it .

Everratic responds:

"Use a frame of reference before you start your tracks. By that I mean listen to a professional song then you won't need expensive gear. I still use my shitty headset even tho I got monitors :p"
Thanks for the advice. I will definitely try to remember this for next time!

"Anyway the intro was kinda boring . Once the main chorus broke in it was a lot easier to listen to."
That's a very brief statement so I don't know why it was boring to you, but I'll guess that it's because the intro is like an incomplete version of the chorus.

"One last thing , work on you transitions. Add more fx, reverb delay blah blah , all that crap. Don't be lazy with it "
I thought of your previous reviews, in which you said the same thing, while making this song. In the beginning, the song was full of reverb, delay and fx, but I reduced it by half because it was ruining the mix. I'll have to spend more time on this next time.

Thank you for the review!

[redemption]

ambient music bro...

not trance

johnfn responds:

shush

[Dressed To Kill]

oh shit

that was my expression at 0:59

Quarl responds:

<3 lav

[Grand Scheme Of Things - UAO]

gotta fix up your volume levels a bit. drums should always be slightly louder above the rest.

when the solo came in at 2:00 everything sounded cluttered.

also, don't use the generic love philter for that first synth lol

looking forward to your next track !

SoLoR1 responds:

Thank you for all the feedback again man!! I wanted to stray from just using that but it sounded soo good! I definitely feel on the volume levels as well, one day track and i for sure should've worked on it a bit more!

Again thank you dude! Will release a better edited version soon!