Not bad.
Hm... the intro could have been worked on a bit more. The harp's melody needs to be fixed in the intro because it doesn't really make any sense. The structure needs more work, as well as the mix. During the climax it just sounds like everything wants to be the loudest. Not good.
This song I believe doesn't sound finished. At some points I thought you were going to take the build up into something bigger, but you never gave it. Oh well, you still got time to work on it before the deadline. ;)