Sequenced's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[However Scanty Their Ilk]

you bout to get roasted ma8ne

ok first off : really cool effect with those bongos. the kick could use more low end, the length of it is fine though.

everything im hearing so far right now is really centered besides the bongos. use panning!

0:30 piano too loud. Use a bit of sidechain on it and lower the volume a tad. Cut a bit of the low end too. the high end from your flutes got muddy because the piano is a all over the frequency spectrum.

the crashes are too loud. your hihats and snares could use a bit of reverb.

BTW I really recommend getting a better piano soundfont. this just sounds too preset-y.

your breakdown arrangement of the track sounds a bit sloppy. when you brought part A of the track back it felt really rushed.

you have really cool ideas here. just wasn't able to execute it properly.

read a guide on EQ and volume mixing should really improve your sound tenfold.

lata

Manx1 responds:

thanks man, roast away. I appreciate that.

2 things, I made this song without clicking any beat into place, to see if the structure would come out different and I noticed it gave a bit of an anxiety to it. I like keeping my stuff... not "proper" especially with electronic. It was a tad rushed, but I was happy with it so I clicked publish. and I know what you mean by it not coming back to 'part a' with a bit more dynamic build up into a drop. I noticed that too.

I really appreciate you giving feedback like this, I will check out everything you posted. I'm only using fruity loops basic tho, hopefully that doesn't get in the way.

[Joystick Junkie]

cool

nice work m8

8-bitheroes responds:

Thanks :)

[Trying To Find My Way Home [LOOP]]

cool drum loop

Quarl responds:

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[The Chip That Broke The Moon]

am i playing luigi's mansion?

Hikari responds:

No you are playing mario rpg

[Water Stage]

this makes me want to dream in 8bit graphics

Hikari responds:

DONT DO IT ITS A CURSE!

[Big Broom]

that cardboard kick is better than martin garrix

Hikari responds:

It is Martin Garix though

[SuperHappyFunTime]

why is there no bass?

Hikari responds:

Honest question

[Cheap LSD]

not loud enough

max threshold and gain pls next time

Hikari responds:

Good ear, I was almost as loud as white noise. I will have to try harder next time.

[Buzz Word]

that clap sounds like someone sampled clipping nails

Hikari responds:

It was screws actually. I took a full bag and just dropped it on the mic.

[Barebone]

this makes me question my sexuality

Hikari responds:

It had the same effect on me when I was making it.