Sequenced's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Abstraction (Quarl)]

this is sick. I have a friend that raps, perhaps he could give it a go. :)

see you at the nyc meet. xox =3

Quarl responds:

guhhhh, now I haaave to go to the meet <3 <3

[ParagonX9 - Red 13]

Hooray!

A long quality song by you. ^.^

It's been a while.

See you l8ters on Mario Kart. <3

ParagonX9 responds:

Hurray! see you at mk7! ^^ thanks!

[Masq - Nighthawks]

dude

this is fucking sick. make it longer!

jpbear responds:

Was just a little thought i was going through, not too serious of a track.

Fucking sick is a nice way of describing it :3

[Kira's Cut - Opening of Flesh]

Not bad

First thing that caught my ear was the lack of variation. Change up the pace a bit, change some notes in your chord progression. It gets boring when you repeat it over and over.

Lastly, the second half of the song didn't go any where. Remember, a song has to have a story. Make an intro, then a part a, breakdown, part b, outro. That's a basic structure for almost any kind of song.

You should look up some music theory tutorials online. Knowing at least some music theory could do wonders for you.

Cell-Void responds:

Thank you! I will try to set up the song in a manner more suitable for presentation. Surely structure could help me, thank you again!

[~Beta~ Downpour (2nd Edit)]

Great.

I'm glad that Newgrounds can see what real House music sounds like. Keep making more, you will definitely get to the tops with this attitude.

aliaspharow responds:

Really nice to see how my music is greatly appreciated even when i do it completely my style.

[F-777 - "Life"]

Woah...

You have been getting a lot of fanboys recently.

All I got to say is - stop EQing your stuff way damn high, and lower the sidechain compression shizzle. Just too much compression... lol

Keep at it, F.

F-777 responds:

Hey! Wasn't trying to EQ my stuff high =).
Agreed i went overboard on the sidechain XD.

Thanks for the awesome review!!

[Walk]

Glad to see you are still making music

Good song, once again mate.

In my opinion, I think that the chorus lines could be repeated a couple more times. Also, you could have made the ending a lot better rather than fading out. A bit lazy now, are we? ;)

Lastly, the pad could be lowered a bit so that the percussion can sound more up front. Have a look into that and see what you think sounds right.

Great stuff overall. Keep at it.

giovanni808 responds:

Hey, thanks for the review!

Yea I am quite lazy :( The song wasI actually a 1 year old project file I found on my older computer, and I decided to use my new microphone :)

Are you speaking about more chorus lines in the middle?

I am not so good at mastering, but I will look at the project file and adjust a bit, and reupload the song the same place :)

[Groovekiller]

Awesome groove!

This is certainly your best song up to date. I would seriously consider doing a lot more stuff like this, you got the talent for it.

My only comment is that there could be a better guitar melody than the one you have now. You know, kind of like the ones you would here at a Mexican restaurant.

In any case, I'm digging this groove. I will help you get into the Top 5 this week. You deserve a spot. :)

Anti-Citizen responds:

Awesome! :D Yeah i do like to take a song and rip it apart. so expect more of this. thx for the reviews. :D

[Hardcopy]

Awesome.

This was definitely a lot better than your other recent song. Have you heard of I am Robot and Proud? He makes similar stuff to this.

Anti-Citizen responds:

No i haven't before but i do now. Good stuff! Thx! =D

[Brilliant Pants]

Numbers

25 Votes
272 Listens
25 Downloads

272 - 2 (from 72) = 25.

/mindfuck

Grillpie responds:

OH SHIT WHAT