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way too much reverb. some synths sound really bland. there some distortoin at 2:05 btw.

the drop flow was smooth as fuck tho. in your break down tho your saws sound REALLY cheezy. it kinda ruins the whole track.

also, i don't know if your snare for the 2nd build up was purposely panned all the way to the right.

eh

thats all i got

good shizzle

Xtrullor responds:

Really good points you got there. I'm on the lookout to fix such problems in future tracks.

cool melodic song. not so sure if i like that weird phaser thing. maybe cause there aren't enough harmonics to make it sound solid? just sounds amateur imo

also dont really like the 2nd guitar panned to the left so much. the room of the mix just felt too empty. maybe have two arpeggiated guitar tracks to fill it up?

i think a more bongo/conga based percussion would sound better than just tapping on the guitar.

meh. thats all i got. has a real calming mood, probably smoke weed / drink to it. its got that atmosphere. :P

Ceevro responds:

THAT'S it! I knew something was getting me about the vocals, but I couldn't put my finger on it! I'll fix the phaser thing, and the guitar. Checking my mix, yeah...I seem to have put it almost 15% to the left...I usually never go over 10. Those are easy fixes, and I guess so is borrowing some bongos from the music store. Kinda odd, I've gotten that comment twice...I thought the guitar tapping worked quite well. Guess I'm biased towards guitar percs.

Very helpful review, Sequenced. Spot-on, as always!

ambient music bro...

not trance

johnfn responds:

shush

oh shit

that was my expression at 0:59

Quarl responds:

<3 lav

gotta fix up your volume levels a bit. drums should always be slightly louder above the rest.

when the solo came in at 2:00 everything sounded cluttered.

also, don't use the generic love philter for that first synth lol

looking forward to your next track !

SoLoR1 responds:

Thank you for all the feedback again man!! I wanted to stray from just using that but it sounded soo good! I definitely feel on the volume levels as well, one day track and i for sure should've worked on it a bit more!

Again thank you dude! Will release a better edited version soon!

its good for what it is

but it aint trance bro.. this is downtempo shizzle or whatever you call that

-.5 star cause cheese chord progression :P

johnfn responds:

There is no downtempo genre in Newgrounds...

funky as fuck

keep doing what your doin bro, love it

SoLoR1 responds:

We will! Thank you for the love!!

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