Sequenced's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anima]

so good to see newgrounds people I've seen grow in the past couple years. keep doing you man. quality stuff.

etherealwinds responds:

thank you so much :) believe it or not, I've grown a lot since this track too haha!

[Another Day of Sun (Remix)]

Not bad! This sounds really good actually. If you arranged this into a full 4-5 minute track, that would be cool.

Fix up the mix a little bit. Some of your melodic instruments get muffled.

Keep going, followed!

etK responds:

Thanks a lot !! :D

[Goodbye]

this could really do without that dance part.

Everratic responds:

That's my favorite part :)

[You Completed Me (Ft. Withoutmyarmor)]

This is a future bass song, not really House. Keep this under dubstep. The vocal stuff at 2:03 is pretty cool.

The mix sounds ok. Not a fan of that weird off beat hihat on your first drop after 1:00

The breakdown has too many risers/falls.

It's decent. keep at it.

GerboPawa responds:

i know it is future bass, and it doesnt have anything to do with dubstep

the hi hats are not off beat, so i dont know what you're talking about.

i get what you said about the risers/falls, listening to the song again i feel like i could have used less.

thank you for your criticism, but i suggest you to check my other and better songs (i've even said that i made this in a day just for fun; i haven't put too much effort into this).

[Arcade]

Your melodies are kinda random and hard to follow. I'm not a huge fan of the "woop" portamento on those two notes of that bass line.

That synth at 3:25 needs to change. It's very loud and obtrusive and does not fit at all.

Basically what this review comes down to, is to find a solid idea to work upon. It doesn't need to be super complicated, especially for house music.

Work on those melodies and your tracks will definitely improve.

JeSa responds:

I will, thanks for your comment

[Inhibition]

Neat tune. I would change the bells to more of a raw distorted synth, but that may just be personal taste.

keep on the grind~

Everratic responds:

I get what you mean. I used a preset and forgot to alter the sound :P

Thanks again!

["Twinkle Twinkle Little Star"- Var I]

ooooo very nice cadence at the end there

sorohanro responds:

Thanks:)

[Mocha]

one of the better submissions of the contest. just being well mixed already has this stand out from most of them haha

I would give 1 more star if you kept it going with different variations of the first 50 seconds as they were the most interesting to listen to. "future" genres aren't my style and the drops are just boring to me. But songs like these always have really cool intros, I just wish you expanded on that more than "hehe generic future drop here".

Basically I'm ranting on subjective taste. It's a good song for what it is tho.

8-bitheroes responds:

Hey thanks for dropping some feedback. Yeah future bass isnt for everyone but i appreciate your honesty and its nice to know you enjoyed the intro haha.

[Chronicle]

fix your mixing bro

Sylux03 responds:

Uh. Sure :p

[wax//wane]

stop copying my title format you slut

happy new year ;)

midimachine responds:

ty babe <3